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Those seasons famished in myriad dreams;
Long of quests in realms of Fae ...
For yet a feast of forest wine I would adorn,
Or beyond pleasures dressed in valleys rich
Gardens of sweet Avalon digress —
Where thy gaze painted embers in my soul
Unto her lore, I pursue and caress
To Autumn’s decree a world hath been slain!
Then Nature’s magick whispered above:
‘And forever the stars shall wander untamed,
like a fable of thieves lost in the wind’

Laments of twilight sweep with promise ~
And over the enchanted I hath prevail’d!
Where I am but a dream, within her dream


— Arthur Crow © 2013
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ohhh dear, I love the part that says "Where thy gaze painted embers in my soul ..." ... Hhhhmmm you couldn't have chosen a more beautiful way of saying that!!! :iconloveloveplz: ... The whole poem is just BEAUTIFUL, Arthur, great job!!! :clap::clap::clap:
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ArthurCrow Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Professional Writer
Thank you sweetheart.. it's really nice when people recognize those few threads of magick I try to weave into my poems :kiss:
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's a pleasure, my dear Arthur!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconsweethugplz::iconflyingheartsplz:
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hiddendelights Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014
Hi there! :wave: 

Your wonderful deviation has been featured this week at Feature-Me-Weekly

Well done! :clap:
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ArthurCrow Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Professional Writer
That's epic of you, thanks so much! :)
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tommyboywood Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You truly are the best poet on dA. You could be a neo-Shakespeare if you tried to publish, though perhaps you have already.  In any case, your numbers would likely increase enormously if aimed at a different audience.  
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ArthurCrow Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Professional Writer
Awesome compliment, thanks for that.
I have published, but it does not pay that well unfortunately.
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BookWormMK Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
The third before last line has a tilde. What is its purpose?
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ArthurCrow Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Professional Writer
Line suspension.
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BookWormMK Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wouldn't a hyphen be better?
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